"...Diving into the deep blue sea..."
AS I LOOKED DOWN INTO THE POWERED BLUE OCEAN, THE SOUND OF PECKISH AND STARVING SEAGULLS SURROUNDED ME. IT FELT LIKE THEY WERE SCREAMING AND CRAVING FOR RAW FLESH. AS I LEAPED INTO THE GLOOMY OCEAN, I FELT LIKE A SEAGULL THAT HAD JUST GOT SHOT BY A HUNTER, FALLING INTO THE DEAD SEA. AS A SCHOOL OF FISH SWAM AHEAD OF ME, I FOLLOWED TO SEE WHERE THEY LED. THROUGH THE CORAL, PASS THE STINGRAYS & INTO A DARK CAVE. AS I GOT CLOSER TO THE CAVE, I REALISED I WAS OUT OF AIR.
AS I LOOKED DOWN INTO THE POWERED BLUE OCEAN, THE SOUND OF PECKISH AND STARVING SEAGULLS SURROUNDED ME. IT FELT LIKE THEY WERE SCREAMING AND CRAVING FOR RAW FLESH. AS I LEAPED INTO THE GLOOMY OCEAN, I FELT LIKE A SEAGULL THAT HAD JUST GOT SHOT BY A HUNTER, FALLING INTO THE DEAD SEA. AS A SCHOOL OF FISH SWAM AHEAD OF ME, I FOLLOWED TO SEE WHERE THEY LED. THROUGH THE CORAL, PASS THE STINGRAYS & INTO A DARK CAVE. AS I GOT CLOSER TO THE CAVE, I REALISED I WAS OUT OF AIR.

...The reason why i wrote this poem is because i wanted my audience to feel what it is like to scuba dive in the deep blue ocean. I want also wanted them to imagine the fishes, coral, and underwater life...
...and this is a descriptive poem...
2 CoMmEnTs:
like the picture where is that anywayz!!!
under da water!
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