"...Diving into the deep blue sea..."

AS I LOOKED DOWN INTO THE POWERED BLUE OCEAN, THE SOUND OF PECKISH AND STARVING SEAGULLS SURROUNDED ME. IT FELT LIKE THEY WERE SCREAMING AND CRAVING FOR RAW FLESH. AS I LEAPED INTO THE GLOOMY OCEAN, I FELT LIKE A SEAGULL THAT HAD JUST GOT SHOT BY A HUNTER, FALLING INTO THE DEAD SEA. AS A SCHOOL OF FISH SWAM AHEAD OF ME, I FOLLOWED TO SEE WHERE THEY LED. THROUGH THE CORAL, PASS THE STINGRAYS & INTO A DARK CAVE. AS I GOT CLOSER TO THE CAVE, I REALISED I WAS OUT OF AIR.

...The reason why i wrote this poem is because i wanted my audience to feel what it is like to scuba dive in the deep blue ocean. I want also wanted them to imagine the fishes, coral, and underwater life...

...and this is a descriptive poem...

…Dream…

As I dream upon a star,
As I dive into a lake,
As I shimmer in the dark,

As I cry upon disgrace,

As I jump into a crowd,

As I scream in delight,

I feel the time go passing by.

I see the sunset and the moon disappear,

and feel the vibration of the atmosphere.

...The reason for this poem is just imagining. Imagining to do things and how it will feel, and what can happen. ..and this a ryhming poem...